雅思写作之地图题中可用的摩登句型

   　写作中，第一幅图为静态地理位置描写，并不算难;但当描述到第二幅图的时候，许多同学徒有一些表示“扩建”“缩减”“被替代”的词汇，却不知道到底如何写出高分句子。现在就是用句型让他们发挥作用的时刻了，快，我们一起来精读一段范文吧：

　　In the present-day town, a great deal changed.

　　分析：主题句，概述这个小镇经历了很大的变迁。

　　Perhaps the most noticeable change are those relating to transportation.Our modern-day needs are very different and so the roads have been improved andtraffic lights, a roundabout and a zebra crossing have been added, as well as anextra road. Increased traffic means that a car park has now replaced Goode Farmand the fields that are located at the top of the 1700 map.

　　分析：此段首先采用被动语态，最显客观。分别用‘have beendone’的结构，即现在完成时搭配被动语态，一举通吃，描述道路被修缮了，安全岛和斑马线被增建了，时态和句型都有加分。其后，一个停车场取代了原来的Goode农场，此处句式进行变化，回归主动的叙述，A取代B的句型，毫无重复。这一段，我们积累的必备句型为被动式：Ahave been v-ed (eg. added/removed etc.) 主动式：B have replaced C

　　Housing is another area where many changes have been made. While in 1700there were few houses, now there are rows of houses and a block of flats insteadof the stables.

　　分析：总起“房屋是另一个变化所在”，然后采取时间前后对比描述，’While in XX there were..., now thereare...’ 一前一后的对比，十分清晰，这同样可以作为重点句型的积累，但是特别注意描述过去的情况用过去时，描述现在的情况回到一般现在时。

　　A further development is the supermarket and the hotel, which have beenextended.

　　分析：前面已经用过对比句型，为了避免重复，范文再次为小烤鸭指引航向，一个非限定性定语从句：’..., which has/havebeen...’的结构，将变化之处再次明确表达出来，让人眼前一亮。此句可总结为’A further development is the..., whichhave been...’

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