发布时间： 2017年08月07日

考研冲刺高速路：英语写作范文之三

环境污染类

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) Suggest counter-measures.

The cartoon presents the Earth with a personified human face that seems quite unhappy.

An examination of the picture immediately reveals that the source of its mood is the air pollution resulting from a huge number of automobiles spread around its surface.

【第一段是论说文的图画描述段。】
第一句是图画的总体描述，概括了图画人物及其表情。
*句子剖析：句子主干是the cartoon presents…，其中that引导的是face的定语从句。
*personified拟人的
第二句归纳图画的象征寓意。
*句子剖析：句子主干是An examination…reveals …；that引导reveal的宾语从句；resulting from是动词现在分词做air pollution的后置定语
*result from由…引起

The cartoon, no doubt, aims at alarming humans of the heavy load we have exerted on Earth by our insatiable production and usage of automobiles.
However, the majority of people merely indulge in the celebration of the convenience brought by cars, while forgetting or simply neglecting their harmful impact on the atmosphere.

Admittedly, there are various factors contributing to the current worldwide air pollution, but it is undeniable that the exhaust from automobiles is categorized as one of the major elements.

【第二段是论说文的意义阐释段。】
第一句是全段的主题句，揭示了图画的象征寓意。
*句子剖析：句子主干是”The cartoon aims at...”。”We have exerted …”是load的后置定语从句，省略关系代词that。
* no doubt毫无疑问；aim at计划，打算；exert… on对…施加…

第二句联系现实，综述人们对于汽车在空气污染方面认识的缺乏。
*句子剖析：句子主干是“The majority of people indulge in…,while…”。While forgetting or simply neglecting…相当于while they forget or simply neglect…
* indulge in沉浸于；impact on在…的影响
第三句采用正反论证的手法，现提出“造成环境污染的因素很多”，然后笔锋一转，用事实说话，汽车尾气却是污染源的重中之重。
*句子剖析：该句是并列复合句。句子主干是there are…, but it is undeniable that …。
*be categorized as 被归类为。

第二句联系现实，综述人们对于汽车在空气污染方面认识的缺乏。句子剖析：句子主干是“”。相当于沉浸于；在的影响第三句采用正反论证的手法，现提出“造成环境污染的因素很多”，然后笔锋一转，用事实说话，汽车尾气却是污染源的重中之重。句子剖析：该句是并列复合句。句子主干是。被归类为。

I would like to make the following proposals to solve this problem:

Firstly, we should apply the most cutting-edge technologies in order to adopt new forms of energy as substitutes for fossil fuels. It should also be guaranteed that the clean energy be inexpensive so that it can be widely accepted.
Besides, there should be attempts to develop possible transportation means, so that citizens can be diverted from dependence on cars.
In short, it is humans’ responsibility to resume clean air for Earth.

【第三段是论说文的方法建议段。】
第一句是过渡句，引出下面的建议。
*make a proposal提出一项建议。
第二、三句提出第一项建议。
*句子剖析：第二句是简单句。主干为We should apply …， in order to…是目的状语；Cutting-edge前沿的，尖端的
*第三句是复合句。主句是It should be guaranteed that…，so that引导结果状语从句。

第四句提出第二项建议。
*句子剖析：本句是复合句。主句是There should be attempts…，so that 引导结果状语从句。
*divert from转移
第四句综述上两个建议，提出解决问题的关键就是人们自己。
*句子剖析：句子主干是It is … to do…。It是句子的形式主语，to do是动词不定式做真正的主语。

第四句提出第二项建议。句子剖析：本句是复合句。主句是，引导结果状语从句。转移第四句综述上两个建议，提出解决问题的关键就是人们自己。句子剖析：句子主干是。是句子的形式主语，是动词不定式做真正的主语。

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