考研冲刺高速路：英语写作范文之四

Unemployment of College Graduates

Nowadays, unemployment of college graduates is viewed as a serious problem in China.
With the development of education, the number of college graduates has increased a lot in recent years.
However, the present situation is that the unemployment rate also becomes higher and many college graduates are facing financial pressures and psychological discomfort.
Therefore, the government must launch a major attack on the problem.

第二句扩展主题句，介绍大学生数量激增的事实。
*句子剖析：介词with引导原因状语，increase 在这里为不及物动词，是句子的谓语，使用现在完成时态。
第三句采取和第二句现象的对比阐释，揭示问题的本质：失业率也升高了。
*句子剖析：这个是个复合句。系动词is后是that引导的表语从句，其中是and连接的并列复合句。
*unemployment rate失业率；financial pressure经济压力。
第四句总结全段，提出政府采取措施的必要性。
*launch an attack on…开始处理，解决某事

The reasons for this phenomenon can be illustrated in the following aspects:
For one thing, some graduates lack professional skills.
For another, the industrial structure is changing very fast and the reform of college lags behind of that process.
Even worse, most companies pay much attention to working experience which young graduates usually don’t possess.

第二句提出现象的第一个原因：毕业生缺乏专业技能。
*lack…缺乏
第三句提出现象的第二个原因：学校改革滞后于产业改革。
*句子剖析：and连接并列复合句。
*lag behind of落后
第四句提出现象的第三个原因：公司过于注重工作经验。
*句子剖析：句子主干是companies pay attention to working experience。Which引导定语从句，修饰working experience。
*pay attention to…关注； possess…具备

In order to improve the situation, it is high time to take some positive measures.
First, college should reform their education system according to the society’s needs.
Second, it is necessary for the companies to offer vocational training to young employers instead of refusing them directly.
Accordingly, we will win the current war on unemployment.

第四句是段落总结句，重申以上建议的必要性。