发布时间： 2017年08月07日

考研冲刺高速路：英语写作范文之十

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Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning
3.Give your comments

As illustrated in the cartoon, a farmer is heartily enjoying the sweet drop falling from a thriving crop which is certainly attributed to his hard work of planting and cultivating.
The implication of the cartoon can be summarized as follows: sweet rewards come after hard work.

【第一段是论说文图画描述段。】
第一句概括性的描述了图画内容。
*句子剖析：as 引导非限制性定语从句，which引导定语从句修饰crop。
*be attributed to…归因于
第二句揭示图画寓意：苦尽甘来。
*come after在…之后

One cannot taste the sweetness of success unless one has tasted the bitterness of hard work.
There are numerous examples to illustrate that.
Thomas Edison performed over 1000 experiments before he finally invented electric light bulb.
Michael Phelps, winner of eight swimming gold medals at the Beijing Olympics, admitted that he had been working harder than anyone else during the training sessions.
China’s dream of manned spaceship has come true after decades-long efforts by thousands of innovative and creative space scientists and engineers.

【第二段是论说文的意义阐释段。】
第一句是全段的主旨句。
*句子剖析：该句使用了not…unless的句式。

第二句是过渡句，引出下面的举例论证。

第三句是第一个例证：爱迪生发明灯泡。
*句子剖析：before引导时间状语从句。

第四句是第二个例证，游泳健将菲尔普斯。
*句子剖析：”winner of eight swimming gold medals at the Beijing Olympics”是主语Michael Phelps的同位语，谓语为admit，that引导admit的宾语从句，宾语从句使用了过去完成进行时态，表示过去一段时间的持续。
第五句是第三个例证，中国载人航天飞船。
*句子剖析：主句是现在完成时态，after引导时间状语。
*manned spaceship载人飞船； come true 成为现实。

There is no shortcut to success and perseverance and determination pave the way to it.
Just like the cartoon shows, we have to sweat in order to reap any harvest in our life.

【第三段是论说文的方法建议段。】
第一句是本段的主旨句，总述成功之路。
*句子剖析：and连接的并列复合句。
*shortcut捷径；pave the way to…为…铺路。
第二句回到图画扣题。

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